Thursday 13th September 2012

After having my intial essay was drafted, I discovered that my theme of treachery of women was too broad, and it required some adjustments to satisfy the essay. After some brainstorming, I discovered that two themes within treachery are lust and adultery, and they would work well with the supporting themes of loyalty and betrayal. After putting them in my essay and reading through, I found that it had a better flow and highlighted the main points which I was lacking in my initial essay. With some more adjustments in my next lesson, I am confident that my essay will be up to standard and conveying the themes within the essay.