Wednesday, 22 August 2012

Friday 17th August 2012


I have now successfully completed a draft of my special study, and shall be handing it into the teacher for what I expect to be scrutinous drafting. I am pleased with how the draft has gone, and I feel that the research I have done will support the essay, which is written below:
 
Special Study: Essay

How is the theme of the treachery of women explored in The Illiad, The Odyssey and The Voyage of the Argo?

Treachery can be interpreted in many ways, but when in accordance with epic Greek poems The Voyage of the Argo, The Iliad and The Odyssey, it is interpreted through the extremity of the disloyalty of women. In a world which was wrote by only men, there was a degree of sexism and favouritism which could be explored, however it is also important to analyse the treatment of women in the Mycenaean Age. When exploring the theme of the treachery of women, there are examples within each epic Greek poem of treachery, or lack of, and how that is punished, or in the case of Penelope, rewarded. Medea’s treacherous betrayal of her father Aeetes and brother Apsyrtus culminated in the King of Colchis losing the three things he cherished most. Her treachery was deemed so due to her choice of blind love over her family oikos, however when under the spell of Eros’ arrow, her actions could not be prevented. Helen’s treacherous adulterous acts with Paris of Troy behind the back of her husband King Menelaus of Sparta proved to be the catalyst to the Trojan War, which led to the death of thousands of Greeks. Like Medea, Helen had no way of preventing her actions, as Aphrodite had promised her to Paris after his judgement. Penelope’s unwavering loyalty to her husband King Odysseus of Ithaca even when faced with one-hundred and eight Suitors is the primary example of the devotion and obedience which was expected of Greek women in the Mycenaean Age. She executed her astonishing wit to fool the Suitors and waited twenty years for her lost husband to return to her, which is a pivotal reminder that some women can resist the temptation of treachery in epic Greek poems. Thus, when exploring The Iliad, The Odyssey and The Voyage of the Argo, the theme of the treachery of women is diverse in the actions of the central female figures in each respective epic poem.

In epic Greek poems, as men are sent off to battle or arrive in foreign places, the women have the expectation of being loyal wives who stay in the house and ensure that the bloodline of the man continues. In Mycenaean times, “the wife serves as the mistress of the household, keeping watch over provisions and property and supervising the slaves”[1], but most importantly, women were expected to be loyal to their family and husband, keeping the oikos pure. The punishment for any treachery, especially adultery, was vastly different for men and women. Helen of Sparta was imprisoned with Menelaus forever for her treacherous betrayal of him, however Odysseus slept with Kirke and Kalypso, and Penelope was expected to still be loyal and accept Odysseus’ adultery. This treatment of women reinforces the speculation of how sexism influences the perspective of the inequality of men and women in Mycenaean Greece. Apollonius of Rhodes and Homer were two of the most prominent epic poets in this era, and, coincidentally; they, like all epic Greek poets from this time, were male. There is no evidence of female epic poets, however, this does not escape the fact that there is a definite favouritism to men in the epic poems. Despite this, the majority of women in these poems experience moments of treachery and are punished accordingly, however, on rare occasions, women resist the temptation to be treacherous and are rewarded.

Medea served as the main beneficiary to Jason in his pursuit of the elusive Golden Fleece in Apollonius of Rhodes’s The Voyage of the Argo, however it is her betrayal of brother Apsyrtus and father King Aeetes of Colchis which revealed the treachery she would commit for love. As princess of Colchis, Medea was well-respected, however her father Aeetes favoured Apsyrtus, Medea’s brother, over her. A devout worshipper of the Goddess of Witchcraft Hecate, it was this witchcraft which Medea used to assist Jason in succeeding in what was presented as an impossible task by Aeetes. Jason was initially reluctant to ask for Medea’s guidance and assistance, proclaiming, “But oh, how bleak the prospect is, with our one hope of seeing home again in women’s hands!”[2] Hera persuaded Aphrodite to order her son Eros, “to loose an arrow at Aeetes’ daughter, Medea of the many spells, and make her fall in love with Jason”[3], and this proved to be the catalyst for Medea’s betrayal of her family. After assisting Jason in taking the Golden Fleece, Medea fled with the son of Aeson, and prepared an ambush for her brother Apsyrtus. “Medea gave the heralds a message for Apsyrtus that would serve as bait”[4], and her loyal brother took it; eventuating in a gruesome ambush from Jason as he slaughtered Apsyrtus. Medea’s treachery was complete, as Apsyrtus, “painted red her silvery veil and dress”[5], and the Argonauts fled back to Iolcos with her. This betrayal from Medea is portrayed as being gruesome for the bloodied ambush of her brother Apsyrtus, while also stripping her father of his most prized possession; the Golden Fleece.

 

Helen’s betrayal of her husband Menelaus in The Iliad resulted in the death of thousands of Greeks in one of the most memorable and gruesome battles; the Trojan War. Helen had been loyal to Menelaus, however after the Judgement of Paris, “she was used by Aphrodite, who gave her to Paris as a reward”[6], for selecting the Goddess of Love as the fairest of the goddesses. Truly enraged, Menelaus sought comfort from his brother Agamemnon, however his brother suggested the prospect of war with the Trojans, as Agamemnon and his Achaean forces had conquered the majority of ancient Greece. This betrayal from Helen was the catalyst to the Trojan War; a battle which lasted for ten days and resulted in the death of thousands of innocent Trojans, as the Achaeans used Odysseus’ invention of the Trojan Horse to infiltrate the Trojan walls and pillage the city. This betrayal of Helen was brought to an end by Menelaus, who reclaimed and imprisoned her within his palace, ensuring that she never betrayed him again. When speaking with Telemachus and her husband, Helen proclaimed, “shameless creature that I was!”[7], and this quotation epitomises the harsh realisation of her actions and the misery and shame it has brought to her and Menelaus. Helen’s treachery to her husband Menelaus proved to be the pivotal catalyst for the Trojan War; resulting in the death of thousands of innocent people because of her lustful intentions.

Penelope’s unwavering loyalty to her husband Odysseus in Homer’s The Odyssey proved that there was not always treachery from the central females in Greek epic poems. “For twenty years she waited for Odysseus, away at the Trojan War”[8], and in that time she was courted by one-hundred and eight Suitors, who Telemachus proclaimed were, “too cowardly to present themselves at her father’s house”[9], and instead constantly resided in the house of Odysseus, “eating me out of house and home”[10] Despite so many men competing for her hand in marriage, and with her husband absent for twenty years, Penelope did not descend into the treacherous actions of Klytemnestra when her husband Agamemnon, “caught off his guard through the treachery of his accursed wife”[11], was murdered by Aegisthus. Instead, Penelope used the wit which had made her the perfect match for Odysseus to postpone the Suitors and allow Odysseus the time to return, however this was never the true plan; it is more likely that Penelope was avoiding the Suitors for as long as she possibly could. “She misled them with a trick: promising that she would take a new husband when she had finished weaving Laertes’ shroud, she unpicked during the night what she had woven during the day”[12]. Her constant use of wit and devotion to Odysseus showed how Penelope did not follow the treacherous paths of Medea, Helen or Klytemnestra, and this loyalty was a contrasting theme in comparison to the treachery of women, as Penelope resists the temptation and is rewarded for her patience with the return of her husband.

The extremity of the treacherous actions by the central female figures of The Voyage of the Argo, The Odyssey and The Iliad defined not only their punishment, but in the case of Penelope, their reward. In comparison to males, the degree of punishment differed greatly, especially with Odysseus’ adultery when away from Penelope, but her devout loyalty was rewarded with the return of her beloved husband after a twenty year absence. The influential arrow of Eros forced Medea to follow her heart and assist Jason in obtaining the Golden Fleece, however this treachery was punished with the gruesome death of her brother Apsyrtus and leaving her father Aeetes without the three things he cherished above all others; Apsyrtus, Medea and the Golden Fleece. Following the same moira as Medea, Helen was powerless to resist Paris after he received her as a reward for the selection of Aphrodite in his judgement, but this unpreventable treachery culminated in the Trojan War; which led to the death of thousands of Greeks and the infinite imprisonment of Helen in Menelaus’ palace. The sexism and favouritism of men in the epic poets is from the opinion of only male epic poets, so there is an air of doubt to the true accuracy of the treatment of treachery between men and women, especially in the area of adultery. Hence, when reflecting on the exploration of The Voyage of the Argo, The Iliad and The Odyssey and the specific theme of the treachery of women, there are varying levels and extremities to the treachery committed, but also the punishment or reward which is received after the actions of the central female figures in the epic Greek poems.

Word Count: 1975 words

 

Bibliography

Demont, P.,  The Illiad and The Odyssey: Troy. Octopus Publishing, London. 2004.

Homer(transl. Rieu, E.V. ), The Odyssey. Penguin, London. 1946.

Apollonius of Rhodes, (transl. Rieu, E.V.), The Voyage of the Argo. Penguin, London. 1959.

Hexter, R.,  A Guide to the Odyssey. Random House, New York. 1993



[1] Ralph Hexter, A Guide to the Odyssey, Random House, New York, 1993. P. 57.
[2] Apollonius of Rhodes, (transl. E.V. Rieu), The Voyage of the Argo, Penguin, London, 1959. P. 122.
[3] ibid. P. 109-110.
[4] ibid. P. 159.
[5] ibid. P. 160.
[6] Paul Demont, The Illiad and The Odyssey: Troy, Octopus Publishing, London, 2004. P. 250.
[7] Homer (transl. E.V. Rieu), The Odyssey, Penguin, London, 1946. P. 44.
[8] Paul Demont, The Illiad and The Odyssey: Troy, Octopus Publishing, London, 2004. P. 251.
[9] Homer(transl. E.V. Rieu), The Odyssey, Penguin, London, 1946. P. 16.
[10] ibid. P. 9.
[11] ibid. P.43.
[12]Paul Demont, The Illiad and The Odyssey: Troy, Octopus Publishing, London, 2004. P. 250.

Wednesday, 8 August 2012

Thursday August 9th 2012

After creating a mind map of my essay question, I was able to create more depth in each paragraph, while also giving them more structure. Below is a revised plan of my essay, however it will have considersably more detail, as this will be the last piece of planning before I begin writing my essay:

How is the theme of the treachery of women explored in The Illiad, The Odyssey and The Argonautica?

Introduction

  • address the theme of the treachery of women in reference to the three epic Greek novels
  • provide a brief explanation of the three epic Greek novels being used
  • address the essay question and provide an appropriate statement to it

Paragraph 1: Treatment of women in epic Greek poems

  • address the role of women in Mycenaean society
  • explain the amount of power women held in this time (eg. physical, intellectual, political, etc.)
  • address the level of punishment for a treacherous Greek woman in Mycenaean society
Paragraph 2: Medea

  • Role as Princess of Colchis and the amount of power and trust that gives her
  • Reasons for her treacherous actions in assisting Jason to retrieve the Golden Fleece
  • Consequences of her treachery for those around her
Paragraph 3: Helen

  • Role as Queen of Sparta and the amount of power and trust that gives her
  • Reasons for her treacherous actions when committing adultery with Paris of Troy
  • Consequences of her treachery for those around her
Paragraph 4: Penelope

  • Role as Queen of Ithaka and the amount of power and trust that gives her
  • Reasons for her loyalty when confronted by the one-hundred and eight Suitors
  • Consequences of her loyalty for those around her 
Paragraph 5: Sexism in epic Greek poetry

  • Bias due to all epic Greek poets being males
  • Extremities of punishment between men and women for the same offence
  • Lack of epic Greek heroins in the poems
Conclusion

  • Summarising the key points of the essay, especially the consequences of treachery
  • Applying evidence to support the earlier statement of the essay question
  • Personal opinion and reflection of the essay question, including a concluding statement
As the word count is 2000 words, I feel that each paragraph shall be around 250 words long, allowing me to have at least 300 words in both the Introduction and Conclusion.